PlantedCommunityTank132
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I have no idea if anyone would even think about buying this, but I thought I'd give it a try. I thought I might sell live baby brine shrimp to other hobbyists in my region.
"Live baby brine shrimp for sale. Message me how much grams of brine shrimp you want, and I will hatch them for you. Live brine shrimp are an awesome fish food with lots of protein and increase chances of your fish spawning. Fry will have a faster growth rate if you feed brine shrimp once in a while as well. I will hatch the brine shrimp for $4 per gram of brine shrimp eggs"
What do guys think? Is this even proper English? Is the price too high? Am I telling any lies in the text?
"Live baby brine shrimp for sale. Message me how much grams of brine shrimp you want, and I will hatch them for you. Live brine shrimp are an awesome fish food with lots of protein and increase chances of your fish spawning. Fry will have a faster growth rate if you feed brine shrimp once in a while as well. I will hatch the brine shrimp for $4 per gram of brine shrimp eggs"
What do guys think? Is this even proper English? Is the price too high? Am I telling any lies in the text?